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[b]Al James Singer Songwriter wrote:[/b]
[quote]Hi.   Ive finished a new track called &quot;Here With Me&quot; and wonder if I could get some feedback from this forum please?  Good or bad its all good...  And thank you :-)

The song is on http://www.myspace.com/aljamessongwriter

Myspace Page.]

Here is the lyric;

I would walk across a desert without rain, to have you near
Feel the blaze against my skin, run a
race I cannot win, to face my fear
That now I'm lost at sea
Cos you're not here with me

I would walk a year of darkness in a maze for you, where I can't see
That all the riches I have gained and the knowledge I've attained, have set me free
But I'd give it all away
To have you here with me

I can't find my peace tonight, cos you are all that's on my mind and I, feel a little
strange
Can't wait for tomorrow, when you are no longer in my mind, but it in my arms again
These are lonely hours, when you're not here with me...

I would unlock a wilderness of tears, to have you near
Look my demons in the face, to find a better place where I don't steer
But I can't find the key,
If you're not here with me

I can't find my peace tonight, cos you are all
that's on my mind and I, feel a little strange
Can't wait for tomorrow, when you are no longer in my mind, but it in my arms again
These are lonely hours,
when you're not here with me
When you're not here with me

Thanks everyone.
Al[/quote]

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Topic History of: New song for crit - "Here With Me"
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Author	Message
DJKZ	Hi Al will email you. Thanks.
Al James Singer Songwriter	Hi I cant find your contact details DJKZ. Can you email me or give me your email? Thanks al@aljames.co.uk
Al James Singer Songwriter	Hey thanks a lot for your nice feedback, I appreciate it!! Will definately follow up on the contact. Will be in touch. Al
DJKZ	Love it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Would love to demo it Al. Drop me a line. I am listening to your songs on Mypsace too. Very good indeed.
JK2006	Very classy Al; I think you are a very big and under estimated talent.