Would like to have your thoughts on this band from Melbourne. They are called Toast, very young but would like your feedback and tips and suggestions because I know you are constructive on this board.

You need to put up a link my friend.

My apologies. Here it is

www.myspace.com/toasttime

Your constructive and honest thoughts about this band please. http://www.myspace.com/toasttime.

Ok, as constructive and honest as I can be guys.
First of all, thank you very much for posting with conviction.

I am afraid that your songs could actually be anyone of a number of acoustic acts and also suffer from the same key and vocal range being used all the time.
You obviously have the talent and forward thinking, enough to go far, but this is not your best produce and I feel that deep down you know this too.
You have a nice vocal on display here and adequate musicianship, but, I hear no songs that want to make me cry, laugh, or, buy an album.
Also, you rush through your tunes and this is not good.
Take your time to express things in your music, it is not a race.

I look forward to the next bunch of demo`s. Potentially , you have it. I hope and actually know this a constructive appraisal from myself, now, get out there and kick ass!

Pleasant but no hits for me.