I totally agree...
I think the credibility of this board is at stake if this is the sort of thing that is being tipped.
I do not usually post any negative criticism of any acts who have the courage to post here. It takes balls to do it and, due to my own lack of courage I NEVER tip any of my own stuff here.
However, I could point to at least 5 reasons why this is average. The most blindingly obvious reason is that the vocal is woefully flat. From the very first line and throughout the song. My advice (as a singer myself) would be to focus on the vox as the instrumentation and arrangements seem ok.
I fully support this board's ideals, in that the cynical and bitter posts that punctuate other industry boards are not welcomed here.
However, if board regulars are to lend any kind of worthwhile advice, then a little bit of honesty would be much better than these bland and woolly responses.
Having said all that, Paisley I wish you the best of luck.
