I think this song could be a hit. Maybe with someone else singing it?

Any tips for getting songs published? I really wanna write pop songs for other artists.

I wrote and recorded the song, made the video on my digital camera with my my wife in it. All feedback appreciated, especially from JK.


thanks

Well, where's the link Joe?

I like it a bit, as a tune, and there is nothing wrong with the voice on it.
I`m afraid that, that with all due respect, I am going to pass on this one.
I think that you are obviously a very talented writer, but this is not the best work that you can do, this song shows that you show great promise in your works, but this particular tune reminds me too much of the very early 80`s period, after post punk etc, when we all got a bit lost in direction, gained playlisting, albeit little sales.

I do hope that this is constructive critiscm for yourself, I really think that you can do better than this tune with your obvious talent.

I rather like it.

Thanks guys. It's not my best song by a long stretch, but it is one that lent itself well to a silly, fast paced video. The drum sample comes from the Bonzo Dog Band's version of The Monster Mash. Big wow!

JK2006 wrote:
I rather like it.
That's interesting - I thought it was rather JK-esque

Nice one Joe... any more?