I invite anyone who's interested to check out my Diversity track on Myspace. I welcome constructive criticism.

Thanks guys.

http://www.myspace.com/paulboonstewart

First track on the playlist.

Few tracks get much reaction on here these days, so I'll start the ball rolling.

I seem to recall that you operate on a tiny budget, so this track is fairly good considering. I'm not much into electronic music, but I stayed with this to the end and found myself actually enjoying it in an odd sort of way. There is certainly worse stuff out there.

The talk-over middle could possibly be mixed a little better with the music, but there's also a place for a degree of rawness. Maybe even a slight change of tempo part way through would help it live up to the diversity title. Those aren't really negatives, just opinions.

I prefer your accoustic tracks, but I wish you success with this one too. Maybe the Diversity angle will draw listeners, so long as they manage to find it among the vast number of other independent tracks on the internet.

Oh, that Diversity!
Yeah I like this one. It is the sort of thing a street dancer might dance to so it has the right feel. That said, I can picture Aiden dancing to this more than Diversity, but I get where it's coming from. Catchy base!

Thanks chaps. I just polished up the mix a bit and reloaded it. Hopefully it's a much cleaner sound.

It has improved since the polishing.
I liked it before, but it's much better now. Flows very nicely.

I didnt hear it before the "polishing" but I do kinda like it, tho I found it on Youtube while searching for Diversity videos. I can picture Diversity doing a routine to it. You should send it around the London and Essex Dance music stations.