Hello, just wanted to get some feedback from you all, particularly JK, on my new material - please listen at www.myspace.com/youmusthearthis

Any good or should I return to the drawing board?

PS I was once a tipsheet record of the week under a very different guise.

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This is constructive critiscm, so don`t worry, as I am sure it is what you are asking for.
Your two my space songs appear to be in the same key, and dropping even one of them, down a tone, would not make any odds to your voice at all, but makes a lot of difference to the listener`s ears.
It is timeless music , that you appear to be creating, and that , to me is very important at this time.
Keep at it Mr Mystery, although ,I have worked out who you are!

The point about the keys had not occurred to me, I'll bear this in mind in future. Nevertheless based on the reaction here, or lack of it, it seems the singer-songwriter approach may not be exactly the way forward for me. Fortunately I have plenty of other musical projects on the go. I'll keep going until one of them works out. Interesting that you worked out who I am...